Federation Commander

I dont think you need to break up each advantage as you have. I would be grouping them into fewer traits.

Lastly, I would certainly add Pon Far into the traits. It is a direct result of Vulcan suppression of emotion that males go through Pon Far every 7 years.

Lastly, you mention noncombat ...

I agree with Rivera here. That

Weapon conversion looks good at first blush.

Not sure the AP is high enough though (based on gut feeling, not empirical evidence).

Hi all. Darren here, from Canberra Australia.