Federation Commander

Draft: 2
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Section: weapon traits
Error: Damage Attenuation X/Y should be Damage Attenuation 1/1

Draft: 2
Page Number: 1
Section: Mountain Clouds-class Mobile Carrier traits
Error: Probe 0 should have a positive value

Draft: 2
Page Number: 1
Section: Mountain Clouds-class Mobile Carrier fluff
Error: Fluff doesn't read vey well. Might need to be rewritten

Added to master revision list and fixed.
Thanks,
TLT

pixelgeek wrote: Draft: 2
Page Number: 1
Section: Mountain Clouds-class Mobile Carrier traits
Error: Probe 0 should have a positive value

The SSD from Module R6 for the Seltorian DDV DOES NOT indicate a probe.
If you have other, differing information - please provide a source so I can confirm with ADB which version is the correct one.

pixelgeek wrote:Draft: 2
Page Number: 1
Section: Mountain Clouds-class Mobile Carrier fluff
Error: Fluff doesn't read vey well. Might need to be rewritten

This was the original fluff provided by ADB for the DDV in Module R6. As with all other ACTASF units, the text is almost completely copied directly from the original source material with as little modification as is required - and then, usually only where the streamlined rules for ACTASF require an edit of the units capabilities.

Scoutdad wrote:The SSD from Module R6 for the Seltorian DDV DOES NOT indicate a probe.

Misread the source material.

Scoutdad wrote:This was the original fluff provided by ADB for the DDV in Module R6. As with all other ACTASF units, the text is almost completely copied directly from the original source material with as little modification as is required - and then, usually only where the streamlined rules for ACTASF require an edit of the units capabilities.

I'll avoid posting these types of issues in the future