Federation Commander

Draft:11-01-2020
Page Number: 2
Section: Abyssinian -class Police Flagship fluff
Error: "Like the other Manx police corvetts," should read "Like the other Manx police corvettes,"

Draft:11-01-2020
Page Number: 2
Section: Abyssinian -class Police Flagship fluff
Error: "It continued to operate as it had before, i.e., as a 'special missions=' ship" should read "It continued to operate as it had before, i.e., as a 'special missions' ship"

Draft:11-01-2020
Page Number: 5
Section: xxxx -class Heavy Police Flagship fluff
Error: "been upgraded to this heavier design..." should read "been upgraded to this heavier design."

Draft:11-01-2020
Page Number: 6
Section: JagdPanther-class Light Cruiser ships of the class entry
Error: "As the LDR never constructed ships of these class" should read "As the LDR never constructed ships of this class"

Draft:11-01-2020
Page Number: 7
Section: xxxx -class Commando War Cruiser fluff
Error: "Had the Lyran Democratic Replublic" should read "Had the Lyran Democratic Republic"

Revisions added to the master list and fixed.
Updates will be in the next draft.

Thanks - TLT