Lyran Fleet list errors

pixelgeek · Post by **pixelgeek** » Sat Jul 03, 2021 4:26 am

Draft: 10-30-2020
Page Number: 5
Section: Panther-class Light Cruiser
Error: Name is listed as Panter -class Light Cruiser but should be Panther-class

Scoutdad · Post by **Scoutdad** » Sat Jul 03, 2021 8:41 pm

Fixed on master list

pixelgeek · Post by **pixelgeek** » Sat Jul 03, 2021 11:48 pm

Draft: 10-30-2020
Page Number: 2
Section: Cheetah-class Frigate fluff
Error: "Used for patrol and police duites" should be "Used for patrol and police duties"

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Page Number: 3
Section: xxxxx-class Local Defense Light Cruiser
Error: "Due to their lack of 'stimna'" should read "Due to their lack of 'stamina'"

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Page Number: 3
Section: Cymric -class Military Police Frigate
Error: Shields reads 208. Should read 12?

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Page Number: 4
Section: Cheetah X-class Advanced Techology Frigate
Error: Title should be Cheetah X-class Advanced Technology Frigate

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Page Number: 4
Section: Cheetah X-class Advanced Techology Frigate
Error: "After the General War, the Lyransd" should read "After the General War, the Lyrans"

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Page Number: 7
Section: JagdPanther-class Light Cruiser
Error: "After the General War began, both of the test-bed JagPanther ships were used asd" should read "After the General War began, both of the test-bed JagPanther ships were used as"

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Page Number: 8
Section: Tiger-class Heavy Cruiser fluff
Error: "Lyran fuedal structure as Tigers were oftenthe" should read "Lyran feudal structure as Tigers were often the" (two typos in the sentence)

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Page Number: 9
Section: King Jaguar-class New Heavy Cruiser fluff
Error: "The King Jauar was made" should read "The King Jaguar was made"

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Page Number: 9
Section: King Jaguar-class New Heavy Cruiser fluff
Error: "new heavy cruisers aare usually converted" should read "new heavy cruisers are usually converted"

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Page Number: 13
Section: Hellcat -class Heavy Battlecruiser
Error: "The Panther-class light cruisers were originally cnverted" should read "The Panther-class light cruisers were originally converted"

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Page Number: 15
Section: DesertLion-classLightDreadnought traits
Error: Should the Lion be Fast?

Scoutdad · Post by **Scoutdad** » Tue Jul 06, 2021 9:08 pm

Added to master revision list and fixed.
TLT

pixelgeek · Post by **pixelgeek** » Tue Jul 13, 2021 7:23 pm

Draft: 10-30-2020
Page Number: 6
Section: Panther-class Light Cruiser stats
Error: Shields are listed as 23/17 but should be 23/7

Scoutdad · Post by **Scoutdad** » Wed Jul 14, 2021 8:52 pm

You meant Damage should be 23 / 07, not 23 / 17.
This , too has been fixed.